Talk:I Know What You Did Last Year/Script/@comment-28713855-20160529013542

Imma give a little critique, mkay?

Story

First of all, the set up may be decent, but the pacing goes way too fast. The "torture" part is way too short. The jokes are bland and predictable, I didn't laugh or snicker once. Vanilla has no explanation on how she is captured. The "teleporting tied up" was an asspull, considering it's basically impossible and doesn't make any sense. The ending is also anti-climatic. In conclusion, the summary was a lie and I was disappointed.

Character of Zelena

It would of been funny if Zelena was tortured and liked it due to her being masochistic, but considering you refused to change her, its not surprising. A little disappointed here.

Grammar

I can see spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes everywhere. Mind if I suggest you proofread before you post?

Overall, I'm giving this a 2/5. Im generally disappointed.

I'm just giving a critique, don't act like im a horrible person. I'm trying to help you, not destory you.