Talk:African Hyenas/@comment-29942783-20190719195717

"injuries - shifty is eaten by hyenas"

dude, if a person got eaten they might be good as dead. and seeing shifty's expression on the image...yeah he is dead and gone.

also what with the 35 minutes later? it would make sense to put "35 minutes during the surgery" to make anyone understand it.

i am sorry but you need to fix your grammars and sentences, especially with the conversations and the characters themselves.