User blog comment:1MysteriousEnigma/Bring Em Here/@comment-24491127-20150503015054/@comment-24583896-20150503194927

Okay, here are my thoughts

Pitch: S/he is okay, but this definitely is not one of your best character ideas <XD I like how s/he serves as a nuisance, but it can grow repetitive and annoying after a while. I'd suggest giving him/her more of a personality and perhaps a gender?

Calf: I like her, but I'd like to know how she developed all those phobias. Also, I wouldn't consider this one of your best character ideas either. Many characters are lonely and cowardly, but Calf is unique simply because of her quest to find her mother. What I don't get here, if she'll leave town and search for her mother all on her own, why is she always so nervous? That could also get pretty annoying

Both Momma and Top Secret seem like a decent episodes,  but they need some development. You can achieve this yourself XD I've only written like 3 episodes, I'm probably not the person to approach for episode critique