Thread:Lord O' Darkness/@comment-19945632-20131119063726/@comment-19945632-20131119133901

Lord O' Darkness wrote: You're editing large sections of the article, changing its wording when it is fine the way it is.

You said not much is known about Flippy, but a lot is known about him it is NOT fine as it is, it reads TERRIBLY and it's awkwardly written and full of grammatical and syntax errors. I was trying to clean it up so that it would flow better and not look/feel stilted.

There are a number of inaccuracies in it too:

1. It failed to take note of the fact that hating on Flippy Sues is pretty much beating a dead horse because nobody (or at least, EXTREMELY FEW people) has seriously made a genuine Flippy Sue in ages. All I've seen are parodies.

2. The article says he has PTSD. I don't think the show or the writers ever said explicitly that he has PTSD... Also PTSD and DID are clearly defined in the DSM (Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders), and whatever Flippy has sure doesn't match either of them. Like I said, what he has is more akin to a stereotpyical Hollywood slasher movie split personality than either PTSD or DID.

3. We do NOT know WHERE he came from. We do not have a backstory beyond that "he was a soldier in a war", and whatever happened in Operation Tiger Bomb (which is oddly not mentioned in that article). We do not know he came from "a small town" (if we assume that the place the rest of the HTFs live is his home town- well the problem is that the places they live FLUCTUATE HEAVILY between episodes- sometimes it's a small town, sometimes it's a big-ass city).