Talk:Ayla/@comment-29942783-20190222044010

things need to fix about her:


 * 1) the colors were good but just vibrant, might need to decerase the saturation, otherwise her colors wouldn't be appealing
 * 2) the crush on disco bear and flippy sound bit overrated, mostly the latter. don't mind the lovers but flippy just too much
 * 3) plus the flip out part just too unoriginal, along with crush on flippy. most people will consider her to be flippy-sue, so i suggested you to change that part into something else like yelling or smashing objects around her
 * 4) "character who rarely die" is fine but don't get overboard by it, making her unkillable is no excuse

these were all criticism but if you want to keep her like that then that's fine since she's your character not mine. unless you stole/recolor/trace it from someone else