Talk:White Trash/@comment-28396600-20181014234153

Please don't take offense to this or anything but I just wanted to let you know that while I did like this story over all, the part where you said "LMFAO" kind of threw me off a bit. I don't really think it's a good idea to incorporate texting speech into stories, it has a tendency to kick certain readers out of the story they've been invested in. I'm not referring to the fact that it implies profanity (laughing my fucking ass off), that's not the problem at all. Being an aspiring writer myself, I used to have a similar problem where I had once developed a bad habit of incorporating text speech and occasional even 1337 (remember when that was a thing?) into my stories. Back when I did things like that, more often than not the reception I received from fellow writers towards the use of such language was hardly ever positive. Please don't think I'm harshly criticizing you or anything, I just wanted to let you know that some people may find the use of the generally informal term LMFAO being thrown into the story for no real reason somewhat off putting.