User blog comment:Brittonbubba/SAFE FOR WORK Random blog for anyone./@comment-762531-20121219042037/@comment-762531-20121221002815

OK, I've used it, and by looking at all of the characteristics Elemental has, he is a Gary Stu.

His name was probably chosen because his name had an appropriate meaning, he is so light that he can be mistaken for an anorexic, he's strong enough to hold weapons and guns despite him not having bulding muscles, he has several features not normal for his species, he's been in a lot of physical fights and never sufered a single scar, he's impervious to any of the normal limitations and/or weaknesses of his species, he's been magically altered AND he's happier this way, he has two "pets" not normal for the series (Girintina and Rayquaza), he picks up skills unusually fast, he is simply the best at least 8 fields in what he does, he uses magic in a typically non-magic series, he can fly where most characters are groundbound AND he can do it without wings, he possesses powers that can take out entire legions of soldiers, he has a lot more relatively unique special powers/abilities that come in handy, he can single-handedly take out more armed forces than I can count on one hand using his MAD KICKASS SKILLZ in one go, he alone uses weapons that were legendary before he aquired it AND the weapon is magical, he uses a sword-type weapon in a relatively modern setting for no logical reason, FrogKing2010 feels insulted, attacked, or defensive when someone "attacks" his character, he feels like the Mary Sue test insulted and attacked his character, he's just as good and even better at fighting than Flippy, he has gadgets, weapons, and powers that can rival all canon characters, and he basically does it to contrast from them all. The only De-Suifier is that he has been selfish, petty, lazy, shallow, and pointlessly cruel at times.

All of that gives the total Sue Score of: 70

Score of 36+:

Fanfiction authors, you might just want to start over. Role-players and original fiction authors, at this point your characters are likely to provoke eye-rolling and exclaimations of "yeah, right!" from your readers. Immediate workover is probably in order.

Score of 50+: It's probably a lost cause either way.