Thread:Ricky the beaver/@comment-37008331-20181108005425/@comment-37440306-20181122002057

This is some sweet dialogue and story-writing bro! I love it. I can already see what is going on between me and you in this story. I really don't want to feel like an "attention hog", and I can see that you are feeling bummed out because you did not get a chance to speak to our friends about your side of the story. I am interested to see what happens next.

Please continue with your storytelling process and keep the dialogue and everything else the same. You are doing a fantastic job bro! :)

P.S:Correct me if I am wrong, but wouldn't it make more sense for this part: “With certain residents, this town is nothing but boring!”, said Flaky --- and change it to "With certain residents, this town is anything but boring!," said Flaky. Or you could write, "With certain residents, this town is not boring at all!", said Flaky. Either option sounds good, because Happy Tree Town is obviously a place that has all sorts of adventures (and misadventures) that happen there. :D